Monday, November 30, 2015

Quick Write

This week I am publishing a quick write. This is when we do 15 minutes of silent writing. This is one of my quick writes. I hope you like it.

As I entered the dark tunnel I had a feeling of existent and worries. I was wondering if I should go out but it was to dark to see the way out. I keep on walking. I heard a strange noise that made me freeze. I could just make out what it was. It was a KITTEN! Well that was the last thing I thought I would. find  in a tunnel. I pick the kitten up wondering how it belonged to. When I was walking I saw a green light. That's weird.I put the kitten down and went to look inside. When I got inside the light turned from green to white. That's strange. "WOW! " I said as I saw the pure gold table. How ever lives here must be very rich. As i looked around it seemed to be more like an office than a home. I heard a noise the saw an oldish lady come out. I quickly hide behind a desk. "Oh I thought someone was there. She walk out of the room. Suddenly I remembered the message from spy H.Q. Beware of and oldish kind looking lady she is trouble.

TO BE CONTINUED.

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My Birthday

On November the 21st was my 10th birthday.
I got lots of presents. I got a horse duvet cover, USB stick, tog bag, some new clothes, a box of Roses chocolates and the bounce game. I also had a rich chocolate. Some of my friends and I went to Ocean Spa. 


It was raining so my dad put up our tent. We kept running from the cold pool to the warm pool to the hot pool. We had pepperoni pizza for dinner. We had lots of races in the lane pool and i won them all. I invited Keighan, Bella, Renee and Hannah to my party. I had a great Birthday.


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Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Retell

This week I am sharing with you my retell. I did Goldilocks and the three bears. This is my retell.


MY STORY: Goldilocks and the tree bear’s.


Once upon a time there lived a girl called Goldilocks. She had beautiful golden curls. Goldie and her mother live by some dark woods. One day Goldie was so curious about the woods she decided to have a look.


In the middle of the wood Goldie found a little cottage. She went to see if the door was locked but it wasn't. So Goldie went inside. Goldie saw a table with a pretty apple table cloth. On the table were biscuits and strawberries dipped in chocolate. Yum! Goldie sat down at the table and began to eat. Before she knew it she had eaten all the food. When Goldie was full she went to sit down.


The first chair she sat on was to hard then the next was to soft but the last small one was just right. She started to swing on the chair it broke into pieces. “WOW! I did not think that was going to happen” said Goldie. So Goldie wandered up the stairs wondering what she would find.


Goldie found three beds in a row. She laid on the first one but it was too hard. She went and laid on the next one but that one was too soft. The last bed Goldie tried was just right. It was so comfy that Goldie fell asleep.


Later that day the 3 bears were back from there walk and found that all there food was gone, baby bear's chair was broke then they went upstairs and saw Goldie in baby bear’s bed. Goldie woke up straight away and SCREAMED and ran all the way home.


And that was the last time the bears saw Goldie and the last time Goldie went into the woods. And they all lived happily ever after.

The end.

I hope you liked my retell.




Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Poem

This week for writing I was doing poem with Mr M. I am sharing this piece of work because it is my first time writing a poem and I think that I did a good job. I did my poem about me. This is my poem.

ME!
I'm:
Horse Crazy
Likes daisies
Really tall
Loves the mall
Quite smart
Loves art
Yum jam tarts
Doesn't like darts
Chocolate-mugger
Not a hugger
Spider lover (The desert spider)
Has a mother
Not a big eater
Has a heater
Basket-ball sad
Swimming mad
That's why I'm glad
I'm ME!

This is a word art about my poem.


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