Wednesday, November 11, 2015


This week I am sharing with you my retell. I did Goldilocks and the three bears. This is my retell.

MY STORY: Goldilocks and the tree bear’s.

Once upon a time there lived a girl called Goldilocks. She had beautiful golden curls. Goldie and her mother live by some dark woods. One day Goldie was so curious about the woods she decided to have a look.

In the middle of the wood Goldie found a little cottage. She went to see if the door was locked but it wasn't. So Goldie went inside. Goldie saw a table with a pretty apple table cloth. On the table were biscuits and strawberries dipped in chocolate. Yum! Goldie sat down at the table and began to eat. Before she knew it she had eaten all the food. When Goldie was full she went to sit down.

The first chair she sat on was to hard then the next was to soft but the last small one was just right. She started to swing on the chair it broke into pieces. “WOW! I did not think that was going to happen” said Goldie. So Goldie wandered up the stairs wondering what she would find.

Goldie found three beds in a row. She laid on the first one but it was too hard. She went and laid on the next one but that one was too soft. The last bed Goldie tried was just right. It was so comfy that Goldie fell asleep.

Later that day the 3 bears were back from there walk and found that all there food was gone, baby bear's chair was broke then they went upstairs and saw Goldie in baby bear’s bed. Goldie woke up straight away and SCREAMED and ran all the way home.

And that was the last time the bears saw Goldie and the last time Goldie went into the woods. And they all lived happily ever after.

The end.

I hope you liked my retell.

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